PaperCoach review: is it legit?

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The Essay I Bought From PaperCoach​

Instructions​

• Type of paper: Essay
• Subject: English
• Topic: Academic Success as a Member of the University Honors Program
• Level: High School
• Length: 1 page
• Citation: APA
• Urgency: 10 days

PaperCoach Essay Analysis and Evaluation​

Grammar and Spelling: 8/10

The writer uses Passive voice a lot that is not preferable in the essays. Using Passive voice in most cases marks not very strong grammar knowledge of the author. For example:

• “For this reason, they are actively requested by employers.” – better to change to “For this reason, employers they are actively sending them requests.

Style and word choice: 9/10

• “The honor Program” – Honor must be written with a capital letter.

Punctuation: 8/10

• The writer used compound sentences that are rather complicated. It is better to use two short ones instead of one compound separated with a dot and comma.
• For example:
  1. Put a dot instead of a colon:
  2. “themselves: they are” – “themselves. They are”
  3. Put a dot instead of a dot and comma:
  4. “in them; compared” – “in them. Compared”

Formating: 10/10

• The formatting is correct.

Plagiarism: 10/10

• No plagiarism was detected.

Documentation and evidence: 10/10

• The author used three relevant sources and cited them properly.

Following instructions: 10/10

• The writer followed all the instructions they were given.

Punctuality: 10/10

• The essay was delivered before the deadline.

Ordering and delivery: 10/10

• The ordering process was very easy.

Communication with support: 10/10

• The support helped with all the questions.

Communication with the writer: 1/10

• The first draft was great, so we didn’t have any reason to contact the writer.

Payment: 10/10

• The payment process was smooth. But it would be better if they accept PayPal payment.

Ideas and content: 10/10

• The writer presented some interesting ideas that were relevant to the essay’s topic.

Organization: 9/10

• There are some unclear choices of writing, but overall, the essay was very easy to follow.

What was good​

The writer mostly has good English and his writing is grammatically correct. The text is completely plagiarism-free.

What was missing​

The writer has made minor grammar and punctuation errors several times throughout the text.

Overall​

The writer did a good job. The ideas were fresh and interesting to follow. Although, there were several grammar mistakes that are not common for native speakers. Perhaps, the writer is not a US-based writer. But in general, the text is written due to all guidelines and demands. There were no problems with payment, but the PayPal option is more convenient.