The Essay I Bought From PaperHelp
Instructions
- Type of paper: Essay
- Topic: Harry Potter. What made the book become so popular?
- Length: 1 page
- Urgency: 3 days
PaperHelp Essay Analysis and Evaluation
Grammar and Spelling: 8/10
- “The Harry Potter novel series have rapidly become”— has become
- “the series are translated” — the books are translated/the series is translated
- “The Harry Potter series consist” – consists
- “still may arouse interest among the people”— arouse interest among people
- “..already became the part…”— has already become a part
- “Taking into a consideration”— taking into consideration
- “the popularity of the book series and the impact they have on the people” — the impact it has on people
- “is still waiting their favorite writer” — waiting for their favorite writer
- “can be referred as the novels of the century” — can be referred to
Style and word choice: 8/10
- “…and secretly wanting one day to appear at the Olivander’s shop in the Diagon Alley to get a wizard wand in order to start a school year in the Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry”— “one day” should be deleted or put in the end of the sentence.
- “a huge fan base in all countries”— a huge fan base in every country
- “a new world that attracts so much” — a new world that is so attractive/attracts so many people
- “The books have forever changed the lives of people and the course of literature and can be referred as the novels of the century” — the author used “and” twice in one sentence
Punctuation: 10/10
- The author didn’t make any mistakes in punctuation.
Formating: 10/10
- The author made a clear introduction and a logical conclusion.
Plagiarism: 10/10
- Plagiarism was not detected.
Following instructions: 10/10
- The author followed all the instructions.
Punctuality: 10/10
- The paper was delivered on time.
Ordering and delivery: 10/10
- The ordering process is very easy and straightforward.
- When the essay is ready, you get an email notification. Then you can download the paper as an image from your account.
Communication with support: 8/10
- We didn’t have any problems with our order so there was no need to contact customer support.
Communication with writer: 5/10
- There’s no option to contact the writer on Paperhelp.
Payment: 8/10
- We used a prepaid card and it worked well. After the payment, you’re not redirected to your account, which is the only problem.
Ideas and content: 10/10
- The author presented some interesting ideas and was consistent throughout the text.
Organization: 10/10
- The text is well-organized and coherent.
What was good
The author has a good command of English and made just a few insignificant mistakes. The text had a good flow, its structure made sense and it was interesting to read.
What was missing
Although they weren’t significant, the writer did make some errors in grammar and style.
Overall experience
All in all, the writer did a great job. The text has a logical structure and the sentences are connected to each other, so the essay is really easy to follow. The author could brush up on grammar though — he kept making the same mistake over in over. Still, I’m sure this essay would get very good great.
