The Essay I Bought From 99Papers Essay Writing Service
Instructions
- Academic level: High school
- Type of paper: Essay
- Topic: American English vs. British English: Major Differences
- Length: 1 page
- Citation: APA
- Urgency: 10 days
99Papers Essay Analysis and Evaluation
Grammar and Spelling: 8/10
- “All the three are different” — all three are different
- “in pronunciation, vocabularies, and spellings” — in pronunciation, vocabulary, and spelling
- “The pronunciation of words between the two segments is noticeable” — the differences in pronunciation between the segments is noticeable
- “under British English” — in British English
Style and word choice: 6/10
- “Significant Differences between American and British English” — major differences between American and British English
- “Notably, it is divided into three different segments, including American, Australian, and British English.” — Namely, it is divided into three different segments — American, Australian, and British English.
- “Despite the language having differences, it also has several similarities” — Despite the dialects having differences, they also have several similarities
- “specific significant outstanding differences” — too wordy
- “despite most words being shared between the two, they have different meanings” — despite most words being shared between the two, they might have different meanings
- “is pronounced to mean a cushioning device” — describes a cushioning device
- “In conclusion, despite the existing differences between the two, citizens from the two easily understand each other” — “the two” is repetitive
Punctuation: 8/10
- “in words farm or even hard” — in words “farm” or even “hard”
- “Such terms include controversy” — Such terms include “controversy”
- the word schedule — the word “schedule”
- “The word Fender” — The word “fender”
- “in the word color” — in the word “color”
Formating: 7/10
- The formatting is a bit off. According to the APA standards, the writer should have added a running head and shouldn’t have put the name of the paper on the first page of the text.
Plagiarism: 10/10
- The text appears to be 100% original.
Documentation and evidence: 10/10
- All the sources used were relevant and were cited properly.
Following instructions: 10/10
- The writer followed all the instructions they were given, including the revision instructions.
Punctuality: 10/10
- The first and the second draft of the paper were delivered before the deadline.
Ordering and delivery: 10/10
- The ordering process was fast and easy.
Communication with support: 1/10
- I only got a chance to communicate with the writer, customer support was unavailable.
Communication with the writer: 10/10
- I have reached out to the writer to ask them for a revision. The writer replied promptly and made all the changes I had requested.
Payment: 10/10
- The payment process was fast and secure.
Ideas and content: 8/10
- “For instance, in Britain, the word analyze is written by replacing the letter “s” with a “z”, hence written as analyze” — For instance, in Britain, the word “analyze” is written by replacing the letter “z” with an “s”, hence written as “analyse”
- The writer could have done better with examples of the differences between American and British English. For example, “fender” is not a very common word, so words like “pants”, “football”, “trainers”, or “braces”.
Organization: 9/10
- The paper was separated into 3 paragraphs, which made it quite easy to follow.
What was good
The writer delivered the essay on time and followed all our instructions. The writer has a good command of English and only made a couple of insignificant mistakes in grammar.
What was missing
Although the writer didn’t make many mistakes in grammar, the wording was off quite a few times throughout the text. Besides, the author didn’t format the essay properly.
Overall
All in all, it’s not a bad high school level essay. It is a coherent text that presented different arguments on the topic. Although the writer didn’t make any major grammatical errors, the wording was a bit off on many occasions. When the writer presented some examples to prove their points, they forgot to format them properly and used some examples that weren’t very common. So while the essay does its job, it’s definitely far from perfect.
