The Essay I Bought From EssayBox
Instructions
- Academic level: Undergraduate
- Type of paper: Essay
- Subject: Foreign languages
- Topic: The Essence of an Auxiliary Language
- Length: 1 page
- Citation: APA
- Urgency: 7 days
EssayBox Essay Analysis and Evaluation
Grammar and Spelling: 10/10
- The author didn’t make any mistakes in grammar or spelling.
Style and word choice: 9/10
- “depending on environment or necessity factors” — depending on the environment or necessity
- “improves an individual’s memory and listening” — improves an individual’s memory and listening skills
- “An auxiliary language is currently important in increasing an individual’s cultural awareness and connection with other cultures (Nufus, 2019). It is an important prerequisite for inclusive communities in the contemporary rise of institutional and community diversity.” — the word “important” is used twice in two sentences and could have been replaced with a synonym
Punctuation: 10/10
- The author didn’t make any mistakes in punctuation.
Formating: 10/10
- The essay is formatted properly. It has a title page, a running head, and a list of references.
Plagiarism: 10/10
- No plagiarism was detected.
Documentation and evidence: 10/10
- The sources are relevant and were cited properly.
Following instructions: 10/10
- The author followed all the initial instructions I provided and all the revision instructions they were given.
Punctuality: 10/10
- The essay was delivered well ahead of time. Although the deadline was 7 days, the first draft was ready in less than 24 hours. The revision was done in just 2 days, so in the end, the final version was ready in just 3 days.
Ordering and delivery: 10/10
- Ordering was fast and easy, the paper was delivered without any problems.
Communication with support: 2/10
- Customer support representative used canned responses and communicated like a bot, being completely unhelpful.
Communication with the writer10/10
- The writer replied promptly and delivered his work in a timely manner.
Payment: 10/10
- The payment was fast and secure.
Ideas and content: 10/10
- The essay had a good flow and made sense. It was easy to follow the writer’s train of thought, and all of his statements were supported by relevant sources.
Organization: 8/10
- The essay was separated into several paragraphs, had an introduction and a conclusion. The introduction was great, however, the conclusion could have been better. It is not clear what the writer meant in the first sentence of the conclusion.
What was good
The writer has perfect grammar and spelling skills. The structure of the essay is great. The text is formatted properly. The final version of the essay was ready 4 days before the deadline, which is amazing.
What was missing
The writer could have used better wording on some occasions and could have replaced some words with their synonyms so that it doesn’t get repetitive.
Overall
All in all, the writer did a really good job. The text doesn’t have any mistakes in grammar, spelling, and punctuation. The conclusion is quite abrupt and could have been better, but the structure of the text makes sense and the introduction is great. The essay was delivered well ahead of time too.
